Quiet Poetry Lounge : The carmelized definition

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miomina1, Apr 29, 2004.

  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Add a little suga to yo'sweet, plump lips and let me taste yo' smooth and carmelized divinity. Your eyes are crying and beggin' me to satisfy you.
    Honey-glazed skin and soft voluptuous appetizers, fill my mouth,mind, body, and soul. I'm gently kissing yo' neck, lightly breathin and loving you.
    I'm trying to tell you that this isn't a chore, because I know what's in store.
    As I look at you and lay on top of you, I feel yo' nails rip open my flesh like pulp dripping from a freshly peeled and bursting orange.
    Slowly, we breath. And for this ultra-magnetic moment, I become.
    I am yo' bass in your guitar, I make yo' toes tap and fingers snap.
    The sky opens up and pleasure and desire run down, and it won't let go.
    I am love and you, you are the definition.
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!

    :jawdrop: that was good! very well spoken and put, and the way you described this topic as a definition, witty and smart..........flow on :spin:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spin: :deal: Hot Hot Hot
    Mio this was good it hit hard and I'm feelin the picture the details and everything was just like BLING BLOW!
    :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice sweet hot flowing here whewwwwwwwww
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, you added just the right amount of spice to this. You made these images so vivid.
     
  6. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much Thanx

    :yo: Thanx 2 everyone, I feel inspired to continue....
     
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