Black Poetry : the captain of the deep....{repost}

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Aug 21, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I walk...

    strolling in the twilight
    of love's last gleam
    imagining a future
    of weeping widows crying in the night
    as satisfying delights
    wash over their
    .....
    hmmm.

    i see
    honey suckles
    puckled
    and
    grinning
    at the thought of great sinning
    heaped upon them by
    gentle men and women
    that know nothing 'bout
    knuckle heads
    like you and me

    i hear
    betty sue
    and
    billy joe
    singing
    aboriginal tunes
    from down below
    as steam from the hot streams
    seep into gentle folds
    and caress after caress
    elicits a strange
    no
    ...nOOO
    ......NOOOOOO

    i don't know if it's so
    if the little man drowned
    as he rowed in his boat
    when the currents began to swell
    from the bottom of the sea
    but every since that night
    no one has seen, or heard, from he
    who claimed to be
    the captain of the pleasures from the deep
    who rides the waves of bliss
    and taste the joys of sweet release

    the mound flooded over
    as the hairy one did weep

    did you see
    did you see

    where did he go

    do you know
    do you know

    as the currents settled down
    and its flooding ways did cease
    and the rumblings from the deep
    gave way to moans of blissful peace
    and the fire breathing dragon
    spew its fiery breath no more
    she tried to move...to stand up sraight
    but she could not...

    ****, baby, i'm sore.

    before you wake the fiery dragon
    before he rumbles from the deep
    before you stay the moan of peace
    before you strain for this release
    before you cast aside the captain
    of the pleasures from the deep
    inform all of those around
    a flood is coming
    your bow is weak

    Whew!!!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis off da hook man ....wow!!!!
    u mastered this one to the max
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    i likes this shoot indeed off the hook
    flow on....Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa.... :eek:hmy: Alrighty then. Nothing like a little element of surprise sneaking up on ya. Enjoyed the flow....
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My Gawd....

    Could this be anymore "BRILLIANT"....

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown::bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown::bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown::bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown::bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:



    Brother, you were Flexin Skillz on this piece...WOW :bowdown:
     
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