Black Poetry : The ***** Called Jealousy

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The B**** Called Jealousy

    :rolleyes: She creeps in when your man stays out to long.
    She taps you on your shoulder when you hear a strange
    woman on the phone.
    She wouldn't have time to prosper or click her nails and plan.
    If she couldn't cause confusion with you and your man.

    Don't let imagination run wild, remember he's your man and
    not your child.
    Greet him with a kiss and say good-bye with a smile.
    Send the ***** called "Jealousy" back to her cave for a while.
    Use your time wisely and be the best that you can be, don't wile
    away the hours in wild thoughts that only lead to misery.

    Temper doubt with faith.
    Keep a smile on your face, be prayerful and full of grace.
    Ignore faults that soon may fade.
    Cherish your love so that it's integrity you might save.


    The heart that weeps the feet that creep, the questioning voice
    asking him where did he sleep.
    Love him good and love him well, give him confidence in your trust
    and time will tell...
    The ***** called "Jealousy" has up and gone.
    To bring strife and unrest to some other ones home.
    If she should pass you in the street let not her eyes and your
    eyes meet.

    She loses power once she's ignored, as she grows weary and
    tired and bored. For every moment that she stays she only adds
    despair after she plays.

    LET THE ***** SLEEP!

    And let not the wandering eye creep. For her power is even
    greater in the crowd called the "Player Haters".
    An absurd group of people who engage in the art of open
    deception and trickery with the heart.
    And as wicked as the ***** called "Jealousy" , is the one in the
    player hater's part!

    bjs(C)2000
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOBODY SPEAKIN ON IT, MEANS SOMEONE IS FEELIN IT

    WOW! A LOT OF LOOKERS AND NO ONE HAS ONE WORD TO SAY!
    READ ON DEAR ONES LOOK AWAY........"IGNORANCE IS BLISS" TO SOME! I THINKS THE ROOM HAS COME UNDONE!!!!!!! IS IT THE TONE OF MY POEM OR THE POEM OF MY TONE? NO MATTER, I KNOW IT STRUCK CLOSE TO THE BONE!
     
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    ****

    **** didn't know you could come so heavy loving this true piece jealousy can tell you to hurt your lover for real this stuff is
    true
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: ****

    :D Just keepin it real, can't be all Fried chicken and passion! ya know?:cool:
     
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    ya done got mad

    see one whom falsely feel is da one set to kill
    so many of us be dis way yet so few able to know
    u flow on !!! wit ya bad self
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: ya done got mad

    Nahhhh! Not mad, I don't do that often, not good for the head or the heart. But, it is a true emotion and I have been on both ends of the spectrum , and wrote this poem after my divorce. Hindsight is 20/20!
    Not calling anyone a "*****" Jealousy is the *****! , but then
    I knew you two knew that, look you are the only ones who responded! Thanks MODERATOR! :D
     
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    Ms LB....

    I like the emotion in this flow and how you brought jealousy to
    life, she can be a ***** if you let her loose. But I think with maturity and security, you gain control of the shecreature in green.
    Very nice.

    Epiphany

    :heart:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: Ms LB....

    Thanks my sista for the vote of confidence, for as you know the writer is only as good as his/her last or
    best work. I strive to reach excellence in my craft as I seek excellence in all areas of my life! I have learned to keep her
    at bay, by "knowing the truth and the way". Now all my battles
    are fought in the world of spirit and with the pen. My humble
    thanks for this acknowledgement!
     
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    Sis.

    trust me on this, jealousy is a necessary *****. Seven times outta ten if you feel her something's going down or about to go down.. See alyce's poem. But you're right in that its the obsession with her that can get ugly. She's got her place thoug.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: Sis.

    ;) True that for every emotion that the creator gave us is like a barometer or early warning system. Not always correct but often necessary! Read my response to "She KNows"
    by Kitana and you will feel me...As I prepare myself to scribe
    more on the knowing and the showing! ONE LOVE!:heart:
     
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