Black Poetry : The Call (warm today)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 9, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Call

    Deliciously delicious
    Your flow not fictitous
    Delicate and delectable
    Flaws in your body, undetectable

    You're superbly superlative
    I just love being inside
    Enjoying your hospitality
    Getting off on erotic reality

    You and I, sexually prolific
    Nothing scientific
    But more than proficient

    The pace and rhythm fast and furious
    Not much time to be tenderly curious
    Extreme pleasure is the essence
    Raw to the core
    Nothing fancy, nothing pretentious

    Your love and my love
    The main ingredient
    Moving as one
    Uncontrollably obedient
    Obedient to the call
    Not heard by all
    Only to those who really know
    How love is made
    The ryhthmic flow
    The internal glow
    Unashamedly
    Horizontally
    Vertically
    Happily
    Keeping it real
    You and me
    Eternally

    BE
     
  2. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do

    love this piece BE! And I ain't tha only 1! :wink:
    Thanks for sharing that exquisite love you have for...
    flow!

    T
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    gosh BE ...

    you gonna have us all looking at the phone
    hoping we get "The Call"

    love this!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE....

    i've missed you... with every heartbeat... :)

    AlwaysPeace...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go Head Brotha BE!!!!

    Excellent versin' here!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jumping on the bandwagon....

    This was BOMB brotha...ok?

    8th!
     
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    digging this vibe nice write poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 awesome like wow !!! brutha
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word I'm loving this flow and voice. You got a rhythm somethin spectacular in vernacular.
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The flow was so smooth, and yes, I guess it was warm that day. Enjoyed the flow much.
     
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