Black Poetry : The Calculus of You

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE CALCULUS OF YOU

    In this world, there are things so wonderous and complex that they
    amaze the mind and set one at awe. The analytical part of being would love
    to better understand what is seen. Recently in the history of mankind,
    calculus was invented to help better understand the motion of heavenly
    bodies, and thus appreciate the beauty of the observed. How do I
    understand you, one so wonderous in beauty and complex in being? I use the
    calculus, the calculus of you. I take derivatives of your expressive
    beauty , and differentiate what is. With this, I can evaluate the highs
    and lows, the static and very animate parts of being that make you, you.
    After this is done, I integrate all that I know about you, and make my
    final evaluation, and what I find is something that amazes the mind, and
    truly sets one at awe. All this, due to the calculus of you

    Written by: K. Charles
    (c) 1996
     
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    ooooohhhhhh.... Yesssss!!!

    GS...

    BRAVISSIMO!!


    i loved this piece... TRULY!!
    i have neva been a fan of math
    but ****! you make me feel like
    i missed somethin'! :lol:

    seriously... it was fantastic! :jumping:

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    GSalt,

    Creatively smooth!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Too Kind, but I ain't mad at ya

    Sunshine and GQ, you're both too kind, but its all good tho.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MATH MATCH I LOVED THIS PIECE HERE!
    THE FLOW WAS DAYUMMMMM!! KEEP IT COMING
     
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    feeling some love up in hea
     
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    Bowing graciously

    Garlicsal99 bows graciously to RICH and Street So'ja
     
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