Black Poetry : THE BURNING BED...

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know, There’s something I’ve been trying to figure out
    Why some brotha’s marry these sista’s
    But still want to step out
    If you bought that cow then drink that milk
    Stop sleeping with these women who are not your spouse
    Stop starting these relationships outside your house
    Do everybody a favor and
    Pack your bags and just ride out
    The Preacher said until death do you part.
    Don’t say those words if it’s not in your heart
    Because what you see is what you get
    And if she was not a freak when you met
    A big diamond ring, a big beautiful house
    3.2 kids won’t bring the freak out
    If your not happy and not being satisfied
    Just be a man and stop trying to hide
    Then you don’t have to tell those lies
    And keep trying to make up those alibis
    To be with the sista you got on the side
    Having to be careful of where you go
    Because you don’t know for sho
    If your wife’s sister’s cousin, bestfriend
    Might see you out chillin
    In some place you should not be
    All hugged up and hanging out
    Like you don’t have a wife and 3.2 kids at the house
    I’ve heard every reason and every excuse
    Yall can save them all, it’s no use
    She never wants to have sex or give me head
    She don’t cook, clean, or even make the bed.
    Don’t want the attorney general in your life,
    So you just keep on cheatin on your wife.
    It’s cheaper to keeper is the favorite line.
    Some of you brotha’s just done lost your mind.
    Because if I was your wife
    I would tell you, I’m tired of being cheaper
    I think I’ll just let you keep her
    My happiness is worth way more than this
    I’ve done had enough of your mess
    So my brotha’s there’s a lesson in this
    Take your time before your pick
    The woman you want to spend your life with
    Because if you have not watched the news lately
    A brotha made his bed, and then he had to lie in it
    bet he did not know his wife
    :flame: Would set a fire in it:flame:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !
    happy i can man up
    and love that one call my wife
    never go outside our sweet house
    playing the game of cat and mouse
    so many disconnect
    not only men but our sweet women too
    doing things with lords know who

    u hit home here and something many should
    try to understand and get off this adultery sin
    be a bonded love as ( I do ) was plan
    at the alter in front the family & friends
    and yes the preacher man ..........................

    Tyte drop and well heard fo sho tell it , tell it all , let the truth be heard.
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$RICH$$:
    And you are right about our women too. I wrote this piece because I am sick and tired of married men tryn' to step to me. Poof be gone. I am waaaay to much woman to be sharing a man
    Thanks babe for the Luv.
     
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    likewise .................
     
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    Preach on Sista
    Preach on
    Oh my this hit home
    Lord Lord Lord did this hit home.
    I wish I could take this and shove it down that :censored: man's throat I called a husband for 12 years.
    And don't forget in there the I lost my wedding band story when I was playing ball (AAAAHHH) !!!!!!!!!!!!!:mad:
    Oh my oh my
    and yes I agree woman should do the same
    But
    Preach in Sista
    Preach on
    :terrific: piece
     
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    You've got that right. I think folks forget that marriage, or any relationship takes work, hard work. Every day is not a honeymoon in real life. Guess some aren't ready for the reality of things and just try to take the easy way out. Feeling your flow.
     
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    You stepped into the relationship with false expectation
    Thinking that there was no need for any true dedication
    The ink on your wedding certificate ain't even dry yet
    And you trying to get down with this chick you just met
    You think that it is all just part of this crazy game called life
    You still a player for life even though you got a new wife
    She at the house trying to keep the home fires warm
    And you out with some freak of the week on your arm
    And thinking that your actions are not causing any harm
    You say you're a mack and you just spreading your charm
    Well brother I say to you be careful of the things you do
    For your actions truly might come back around to bite you


    Excellent flo cuz. I like that you touched a topic that is often overlooked.
     
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    Excellent scribe, 4EVERLUV. The bed only burns when ignited. Folks bring things upon themselves, then get upset with the end results. How retarded is that? LOL. Burn baby burn:flame:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Intrepid:
    Thank you for the heart felt luv. My sista don't you fret, what goes comes.

    Watz:
    I so appreciate you feeln' my flo and what you said is so true. Thanks so much for the visit.

    asimplepoet:
    Your flo was tyte. Thank you ever so much for checkn' me out.

    Spicy:
    You are so funny. I luv your humor. Your right the bed only burns when ignited, that was well put. I very much appreciate your kind words. Thank you for feeln' my flo.

    Much luv to you all

    I also want to say. I hope I did not offend any of my brothas here with this write. I know that all men are not cheaters and that women cheat too.
     
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    LOVE I GREW UP IN A HOUSEHOLD WHERE MY FATHER CONSTANTLY CHEATED ON MY MOM AND I JUST WANT TO SAY THAT YOUR WORDS ARE TRUE AND A SAD YOU HAVE SHOWN TRUE EXCELLENCE IN THIS PIECE AND THIS IS STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART YOU HAVE SHED MUCH LIGHT ON A VERY UGLY SITUATION AND I JUST WANT TO THANK YOU FOR DOING SUCH FLO ON POET MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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