Black Poetry : The Brink

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Standing on the
    brink....
    the brink of eternity.
    I gaze in
    the infinite expanse of that
    sea,
    and I see.
    The reflection that is mirrored.
    The sun blazes
    and I slowly cook.
    Evaporating from substance to
    liquid and then there is
    nothing.
    In the end what will
    my life have meant?
    Will I be remembered for what I did
    and the accomplishments of my soul,
    and love to many?
    Or will I just be another
    nameless raindrop in the heavens?

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    here is the question i ask daily
    this was well created to the open world
    i wonder if i'll be just another drop or
    remembered for all to know my living
    tyte
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man as always you are simply beautiful
    and a deep and profound blessing.
    I thank you for your love and I agree with you
    as well.
     
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    indeed most welcome from da heart
    u pose such a classic scribe ya self
    i'm just living inside it thank u
     
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    tight drop likes the way you pose this
    feelin ya on this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No problem $$RICH$$ Its all gravy pa.
    Thank you for your heavenly love Angle, You know I love you all.
    Love down below for the moment, that's whassup.
    ~Dior
     
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    Surely something to ponder. But you know, all we can do is our best, and our best varies from day to day. We never quite know what we mean to others, and how we touch their lives, really.
     
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    Whoa. Yes, my friend, I have written poems about this too. I pray that my life won't be in vain. I so feel you on this tight piece.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love and joy to you Gemp and watz. You are both blessings. Thank you for feeling my flow. God bless and love down below in a minute.
     
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