Black Poetry : The breakup poem

[asimplepoet]

I woke up this morning and today was the day
The day that I finally said goodbye to you for the last time
There is nothing really special about today at all
But i woke up this morning and knew I was done with you
Can't believe it's been 9 monthes or 274 days or 6576 hours
Or 395460 minutes or 23673600 seconds or million moments
However its counted it been too much of my time wasted
And I refuse to waste another instant on the likes of you
Mama didn't raise no fool so I must plead temporary insanity
Cause for you I compromise all that which I believed in
Hoping and praying that one day you wake up a different man
But now i realize that you can't teach an old dog new tricks
I'm done cause I am sick and tired of being sick and tired
So goodbye, adios, Au revoir, Arrivederci, or Sala kakuhle
Whatever language it is spoken in goodbye means the same
This is the end, I am done, and we are completely through​

 

[Da Street So'ja]

dang girl

Can't believe it's been 9 monthes or 274 days or 6576 hours
Or 395460 minutes or 23673600 seconds

you got the numbers down pat lol

when it's time it's time, you give your all and what do you get in return?



feeling the release here poet

the release of a new freedom

 

[free2b_me]

LIKE THAT??

WELL IF YOU FEEL LIKE THAT THEN, TO THE CURB HE MUST GO..

 

[jus_dat_nice]

I woke up this morning and today was the day
​

Well if it's time then its time
You better let him know!!!
Hot write

 

[queentswana]

I woke up this morning and today was the day
The day that I finally said goodbye to you for the last time
There is nothing really special about today at all
But i woke up this morning and knew I was done with you
Can't believe it's been 9 monthes or 274 days or 6576 hours
Or 395460 minutes or 23673600 seconds or million moments
However its counted it been too much of my time wasted
And I refuse to waste another instant on the likes of you
Mama didn't raise no fool so I must plead temporary insanity
Cause for you I compromise all that which I believed in
Hoping and praying that one day you wake up a different man
But now i realize that you can't teach an old dog new tricks
I'm done cause I am sick and tired of being sick and tired
So goodbye, adios, Au revoir, Arrivederci, or Sala kakuhle
Whatever language it is spoken in goodbye means the same
This is the end, I am done, and we are completely through​

hmmm I believe if the dog be 8, 80 or 108, it can be taught, only if he's ready, willing and able to learn... If not, better to let sleeping dogs lye.
Excellent piece poet, you've awaken to a brighter rainbow