Black Poetry : the break up

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE BREAK UP


    Im sorry I have to do this to you,
    but unfortunately we can only be friends,
    your just not on my level,
    your mind has so much more maturing to do.

    Yes we can still talk on the phone,
    and even hang out from time to time,
    but that’s it!
    Don’t look forward to those hello and goodbye kisses,
    don’t look forward to anyone addressing me as your Mrs.
    No matter how many times I’ve tried to explain my unhappiness to you,
    you never did anything to change it,

    But still u claim to love me,
    and im not saying you don’t,
    maybe you do,
    but not the way that your suppose to,

    I kept saying I was tired,
    and all you could do was tell me to go to sleep,
    I told you that I was hurting,
    and all you had to say was take some medicine,
    when you were suppose to say............
    Baby I’m here for you talk to me,
    or ask if I needed you .

    Your not understanding my pain,
    I feel like I’m giving my all,
    but your giving nothing,
    so im afraid I have to say.........
    It’s over!!!!!!! :argue:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hardship & love sometime wake up to break up
    is what we must do when one seem to not listen or hear u
    so it's not goodby but depart .......i feel ya on dis one ......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes someone can love you in their way, but if it's not what you need, the love doesn't seem like it's really there. Many have experienced this, I liked the way you brought it.
     
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    Perhaps he couldn't change it,
    You, have to make your happiness...and then share it
    nice piece poet
     
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    :bomb: just a bomb watitng to blow..
    conversation is null
    and sex is a bore,
    you need to leave..
    and theres the door..
    c'ya..!

    **great drop.. its hard sometimes, we get tired of talking about whats wrong, we get tired of pretending that things are straight... :fairy:
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speak the truth sometimes they just need to here it straight.
    And if its all the same that person may never know what thye truly had untill its gone. Nice flow keep it strong
     
  7. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woah!

    It's really deep!!!But it seems like the boy didn't really feel love while the relationship was going on!Maybe now he's sad and he's thinking about the past.He's regreting and wanna apologize,but it's obvious that it's too late.
    Wish that he can overcome what is happening to him.It's just a step but u can't go through alone.Something tells me that this little story REALLY happened to you.Am I wrong sis???
    Be blessed
    Lloyd
     
  8. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thanks for all of your comments, and this poem was based upon experience. i have been in this situation before, but im not alone alot of people have experienced this. i just wanted to share my story with yall!
     
  9. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    More than happy to oofer support to someone who has gone through tough times. Keep your head up.
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spank: OUCH! :spank:

    Would've hated to be the one recieving this, cause what could they have said. I liked your scribe though. Will have to look more of you up
     
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