Black Poetry : The Blues

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A riff
    by
    Coltrane
    and a
    blast from
    Armstrong.
    My mind creeps through the
    trenches of understanding and
    I am
    grasping the
    concerto that moves me
    to an ancient and
    lovely beat.
    basses beat!
    basses beat!
    basses beat!
    We move like a single blade of
    grass.
    Time slows to a stop
    as the music bleeds through
    me.
    My blues become
    shades of
    passion
    and smooth dance steps,
    from the
    glitz and glam
    of a footloose and
    fancy free
    disco ball
    of light
    weight kisses in
    dark corners
    and fiery
    dances
    on the floor.
    The blues flow
    freely and purely
    in and out of what I become.
    We melt in a single harmony,
    intertwined ominously
    in total and absolute
    compatibility.
    Duke Ellington,
    plays for B.B King.
    Nancy Wilson rocks me from my
    head to
    my shoes,
    as she and I
    dance to
    the Blues.

    Copyright 2004 "Son of the Druid
    Inc."
    Kashmyere, "the Earth Druid"
    Orator.Poet.Psalmodist.Soul
    Invoker
    Man of God
     
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    dancing into a sweet rapture of beauty
    this was awesome flowin here ya pen of
    love is droppin ink to da page tyte
    i like
     
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    Liked the way you posed this piece incorporating music and rhythm. Keep the flow going.
     
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    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your love. I appreciate it and I look forward to hearing from you again. Peace and Blessings.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    OO, this is nice! More please.
     
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    this was nice
    likes ya flows
     
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    Man you are all are beautiful and you sure do know how to make a man feel wonderful. Peace and blessings.
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