Quiet Poetry Lounge : The blues in my heart

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The blues in my heart
    Plays a painful melody
    As my pen runs dry…
    Hurt running thru and thru
    I ask myself
    what am I doing wrong…
    burning as if I crashed into
    a gas station…flames all over as
    my heart blew up…
    pieces unable to find….
    Wiping my tears…as they turn
    Black……she tells me you talk
    as if u love her…and
    That u have no one in your life..
    Well who am i….i don’t understand
    Then I think why
    she wanna be my friend
    is it to take what I have…
    or if she tryin to figure me out
    coz I wont let her in……
    will you fall to this and be prey
    or will you stay true to me…..
    searchin for da answers tryin to
    stay calm…then u ask me why am I so scared
    love is rare in my life…
    I treasure…what we found..
    No matter what the storm is I am there
    Holding believing and trusting…..
    do you hear me callin..
    A soulmate that is actually my mate..
    As you feel I feel when ya think
    I know…leaving sum
    thoughts covered..
    But for the most uncovered is our love
    For each other….whats going on…..
    I don’t understand….your near but far
    Watches but are you listening….
    my spirit is weeping....
    My soul hurts my heart is breaking
    My mind is num…and all I want is
    to be in your arms where I feel
    safe at…dayum
    maybe it’s a dream
    and I will wake up soon…
    The blues in my heart
    Plays a painful melody
    As my pen runs dry…

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
     
  2. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is extremely deep.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep scribe feeling running
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok fam i was watchin lifetime again...
    i outline it...two college students one jealous of the other...
    the jealous one befriended the other
    and stole the other life to become popular like here
    so she destroy her
    mentally by takin what was hers
    the lead in her band
    her boyfriend
    and close friends....
    but in the end...the one who
    tried to take over
    lost....so fam this is how i got this piece.....thanks for da read... :angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep...feeling all the drama nice flow..
    tight flow
    Peace
     
  6. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sigh

    thats soo sad.. soo much it makes me cry yet i understand completely ... good job sis that was excellent
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read....
    just me writing....
    on what i saw....:angel1:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz glad ya enjoyed da read....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed this, but it made me feel sad at the same time...
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz fo da read....dont feel sad...just a write
     
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