Black Poetry : The Black Brotha Debate: collab of story and foxi

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1st verse: Foxi

    Yo story, I'm gettin' tired of these crazy @ss men
    Gettin' love but neva given
    Walkin' cross town giving hoochies their semen
    Don't care who they with poppin' ying
    Just a small town fling
    And even then
    They don't care who it is when
    They pump the you know what in
    It's not a lie .....I find that to be rather common
    Especially in the hood with man and woman
    They neva there when summoned
    And they quick to hit a woman
    Up side the head with pockets fat while gunnin'
    I have yet found the right one while I was man huntin'
    Tell me story, what's your story on the black man???


    2nd verse:the_story

    awww sistah..chilll ima show u how REALlY these kings are...

    He would hold u in his arms till
    u just float into that place where
    nothing even matters....
    and u zone out

    whisper sweet nothings
    in you ear till u speak in tongues
    and mesmerize u till the only
    thing that matters
    is his flesh against your....

    He would feed u strawberries
    that would match the color
    of your skin and taste just
    as sweet.....

    incense lights up the room
    ur senses take ova....
    ur eyes behold his beauti...

    Black King...
    Conquerer...
    Lovah Man...

    King of the Universe....


    3rd verse of the poem:Foxi

    Gurl, I wish things were as lovely
    I'm lucky if a man loves me
    and tells me
    It's an even lesser chance of him clamin' me as his main lady
    The men are weak these days believe me
    I remember when back in the days they took care of their family
    Yet, today I'm scared if my man gonna steal from me
    These days you got to asked all the question quickly
    Cuz you neva know when you man is sh!ty

    What's your social security number?
    Where you stay and what your number?
    Who was your last girl and did you love her?
    Who's your mother and who's your father?
    Were you ever a felony or prisoner?
    Are YOU somebody baby's father?
    If they don't answer
    Then I don't even bother
    You can't come to these men as a starter
    Cause they will take you for all you worth and order
    A another lady for later
    I don't understand them brothers
    Story, what do they have to offer??

    4th verse:the_story

    pleaz understand sistah, that all bothas
    ain't a bunch of ****** chillin on the corner
    sellin crack
    wit they boyz..
    let me show u...

    not all men are dogs,
    that will use for all
    ur worth stomping on your
    heart till all u feel is numbness
    surrounding u...


    there are some that
    will take u to places
    that will make
    ur spirit sigh...

    a brotha that
    knows where he comes
    from, and where he's going.....
    a MAN who's eyes
    hold the galaxies
    that HE created....

    shouting that he
    IS MAN over the hilltops
    while pride courses through
    ur viens....

    the image of the black man in America, shows
    that the image of the thug/gangsta/PIMP's/...
    that shows through the media
    AND IS DIGESTED THOURGH OUR YOUTH
    sells our souls to the devil
    at a young age...

    blinding us from the truth...

    A Queen deserves a King
    to love her beyond
    comprehension....
    so breathe ur radiance
    will find the brotha worthy
    of your heart....

    5th verse: foxi

    Naw, I ain't feelin' that peeps
    I'm gettin' tire of comin' home to cold @ss sheets
    Lookin' for a brotha that's faithful yet all he does is cheat
    Everytime I look at a brotha it ends with defeat
    Is it that this is what I reep?
    Love is cheap
    At least in the way of that brotha's jeep
    Callin' and he ain't answering his beeps
    Lookin' at the movies and it's another girl in his jeep
    Brothas break hearts soul deep
    And if what you say is true....where is my brother for me?
    I asked and asked the Lord for a soulmate for me
    Yet I lose hope everytime one talks to me

    East coast slang
    A wanna be Ying Yang
    Talkin' yet it seems like game
    It just ain't my thing
    And I really don't give a [email protected]
    If another one never talks to me the same
    I'll still reach fame

    And I swear if another one walks up to me
    Disrespectin' talkin about " Ah, shawdy"
    Tryin' to feel on my booty
    And they don't even make enough ends meat
    To even talk to me
    I goin' off right hatefully
    Don't they realize I'm the truest foxylady?
    I'm a pimp.....and that stuff don't really faze me
    But tell me story
    Why they neva do right by me??

    6th verse: the_story

    *sigh* let me school u gurl.....

    true SOME brothas today are greasy
    good for nothin wanna-be playahs
    tryin to pop they "Pimpology" to all the
    ladies in the hood....

    but a sistah knows
    that when the sheets get cold
    there is always a goo lovah man around
    the corner to make ur heart and dem sheets
    warm again...

    i have experienced it all sistah,
    and i'm here to tell u that there
    are some good brothas
    out here that will learn to
    love u the way u need to be loved...

    u are above those other brothas
    that try to loosen u up for the
    kill, when they only want alittle.....

    know that God will give u
    a man, have faith,
    and let ur smile
    show brighter than the sun....

    7th verse: foxi

    Well, I wish it would hurry up and shine brighter than the sun
    so I could get a brother with a good one
    swing in the sun and have fun
    but for now it looks like I'm curse with my generation
    Looks like all I be gettin' is castrations
    Mama, told me all the good men have education
    So I stayed in school and I was put in straight hyration
    They treated me straight up wit hateration
    Like I was straight using immigration
    Later after I obtained an occupation
    And I thought these brothas would do a complete rotation
    Yet, I was wrong ......straight using imagination
    My mind had did misconfigration
    Cause' dez men were just as bad cause they use sexual harassment
    Up on me
    And I had to phone on em'
    Cause these brothas ain't right to me
    So, I say forget em'
    I dig em'
    But I can't fig em'
    Sometime I even want to hit em'
    That's why in my life it's rid of em'
    Don't get me wrong I ain't gay
    I got to have me SOME every other day
    But why can't the brothas pay
    the same respect as I give them today?

    8th verse: the_story

    though it seems Mr.Wrong is always what u get
    , know that there are gentlemen,
    that will show u that u are a Queen....

    U cry urself to sleep at night wondering, hating, eyes red, staring at the ceiling for some sign...that God still remembers u....
    forgeting that not all men are sceezers
    that only want that ***** for a few tymes
    then leave ur heart in the bedroom....

    Why do give up hope? Understand thier are two sides to everything good and bad, light and dark, do u honestly think that all men are dogs? NOOOOOO....Don't worry sistah u will find a man that will make ur heart flutter and soul shuttah, but untill then Pray, and put ur faith in God....

    9th verse: foxi

    I'm not gon' even lie
    I think that I
    misjudged....especially sayin' EVERY guy
    Cause I don't think that I
    Could ever live without a guy
    Cause I need my constant high
    Sex drive and all that make a full pie
    But the ones that I meet constantly give that high
    To just about EVERY girl or guy
    God or bad I need any guy
    To give me that fi'
    You know that I
    would go crazy without em'......no lie
    But I
    don't think I
    will ever understand the black guy
    But where would we be without our black guy
    NO LIE!!!!!!!!!!!

    10th verse: the_story

    yes sistah....thanks for feelin my thoughts on this...

    i see what u sayin chicka,
    not all men are dogs,
    some are kings
    worthy of a crown...

    so u down
    i know u said that ya sexdrive
    would be too much for that but...
    understand that its more than
    jus sex, its love,
    and love is what will substain
    the relationship...

    with our brothas u can't live
    with um, can't live without,
    them but i tell ya what sistah,
    in a world without men, i would
    probably go crazy...

    cause men are gods greatest creations...
    Besides women of course....*wink*
     
  2. watzinaname

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    Well, now, my young sisters....wow. Where do I start? I enjoyed the ying yang quality of this, giving both positive and negative descriptions of the brothas. I like it that foxi sort of swayed, a little bit, lol, toward the postive side toward the end. And I love the conversational tone of this piece, two sistas kickin back and having a conversation. Great collab you two.
     
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    duce duce !
    double dose y'all rocked it
    told it and now we know it
    this was str8 awesome from the
    teen blast do it up y'all i love it .
     
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    are we...

    are we really that bad
    locked in the game
    not realizing
    all women aren't play thangs
    do we show no shame
    at being the DAWGS
    we profess to be
    playing and laying
    with every lady
    noooooo.....
    that's not the way to be
    playing with foxi
    while loving story
    a true ebony king is above alll that
    not hating on a sistah
    but having their backs

    we just like that.

    KEEP LOOKING FOXI...HE'S OUT THERE.:)
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much ya'll....I wish I could in him....but um.....it ain't happening baller.....thanks for feelin' this ya'll.....thanks for the love
     
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    ok din...my lil sistas
    tight flow indeed...
    flow on yall two this
    was the bomb
    Peace Angel
     
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    daps my lil sistaz...
    i like this convo....
    and the duality in it...
    this was xtra fresh...
    ya'll make a good team...word
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Word...Beautiful concept my sistas...Men AND women act foul but KINGS and QUEENS know better :)
     
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    hhheeeeyyy yall i'm really glad u like it, i was like sweatin bullets this being my first collab and all....it was an experience and of course i want to thank foxi, for choosing me to collab with....Its such an honor...thanks sister...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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