Black Poetry : the black book(uncensored)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Nov 9, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ive been busy at school
    but i finished the book and right now i'm working on a series of poems title tainted platinum

    Black book

    The beat ( December 4th, Jay-Z)

    My black book, memories took
    The guilt in a took, pain of a life mistook
    I’m leaving, n***** grieving, for thru life I was thieving
    I’m just a child teething, searching for a dream to believe in
    What do I do, I could work nonstop, two jobs stocking stores
    Or I could explore, I wanted more, like vacations on coasty shores
    Sweat, clogging on my pores, dogs licking my sores
    Awake at night, like a wife whose husband snores
    Gotta be more, more serene, the scene of gleam, trying to sew the seam
    Seams of voided constructs, ****’s ****** up, will I self-destruct
    Not believing in luck, smoking like a broke truck, this is enough
    No more, I can’t take, alcohol getting to me, young Remy
    Give me a remedy; send a boy some energy, for many of my friends pretend to be
    Something they not, I don’t know no ballers
    I know the ****** I flowed with, never call us
    See how I’m doing, if I’m dead or alive
    Trying to survive, spiritually trying to revive
    Relive, rebirth of spiritual people, crying at the steeple
    To sistas, I’m a piece of meat; I’m trying to feed you
    The good life, good book of knowledge
    I had to elevate, my state, make a statement in college

    The whole ensemble, life conceptually, trying not to tumble
    That’s how I knew I had more than just words to mumble
    I could design and realign minds, in due time, show kids my grind
    We could shine, locked talents like Shyne, we could explode like nines
    In the air on New Years Eve, how do I still live but not breathe
    Life’s mysteries we could see if only we believed
    Grabbing hands, holding our souls like bezel tine links
    Protection from life’s tundra with our minks
    Shielded with armor, with faith no one can harm ya
    Disembalm ya, beautiful artistic works, depth to the canvas, Cy Twombla
    In renaissance, mike paint pictures, now become digital photographs with low resolution
    In search of a new atmos, a new resolution
    If I have to, revolution, popped cats for a solution
    Thinking my journey grows like a peach, living an illusion
    Disillusioned relations with various females reps
    I once listened to a sermon bout the order of steps
    Is every imprint, meant to stamp my footprint?
    On this demented world man invented
    I copied it pasted it, I attached the text and I sent it
    I lied to you, very word I said I meant it
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was like whoa..
    nice flow :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow

    very very nice flow u scribe can't wait to read ya book
    tyteeeeeeeeeeeee!!

    due to our rules the N word can't be used in it's entire
    form or any outher forms so i did take it out please read
    our forum rules and banned words list to help in the future
    of how we live in our poetic home ...Thank u
    $R
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte picec:)
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok Ok Ok..............you were off da chain with this one!!!! Holla!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooooowwwwww
    this was tight
    greattttttt
    Peace
     
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