Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Apr 20, 2004.
I so loveth of the birth which u pose
full of grace and peace
So eloquent you are. I'm smh because of what I just finished scribing in my head. Anyway, I digress, in him you have restored your peace, which I can't imagine ever truly leaving you.
very well nicely posed
likes this alot flowed very smooth
my Angel sistah
and got its point across nevertheless.
this was sooo elegant i love it...
this was way deep gurl...
your pieces make me think for awhile
because at first i may not grasp the full intensity
then i'll read it a couple mo times...and be like WoW
that was crucial...as is this piece...creative joint
your poetry is so uplifting. I liked this piece
It's like bro. Khasm has headphones connected 2 my mind, cuz it's like that.
Once again, U have done it 2 me.
Very, very nice.
Thanks fam...for all your replies but I gather this piece might be a little vague
...lol...sometimes I think I get to deep for my own good...let me explain this piece a little...
This piece is about the effect a person can have on another and how
their love can seem almost divine and often is…divine…as well as how
often times we're changed forever as a result of that experience particularly in love.
The scripture and revelation parts are metaphorical…(the essence of a person)
I realized that it was a lil’ cloudy after a reader ask me some in depth questions on it.
But it’s about a natural man that is divine…to a woman and the level upon which
they exist…a soul mate connection…non earthly.
But thank you all for the love…particularly Khasm & Positive…you guys are sooo great!, even when I’m vague…
Much love, Peace
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