Black Poetry : The Birth of … * I *

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  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I so loveth of the birth which u pose
    full of grace and peace
    tyte
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So eloquent you are. I'm smh because of what I just finished scribing in my head. Anyway, I digress, in him you have restored your peace, which I can't imagine ever truly leaving you.
     
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    very well nicely posed
    likes this alot flowed very smooth
    my Angel sistah
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    decent piece.
    str8 forward
    and got its point across nevertheless.
    nice.

    WuN...
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sooo elegant i love it...
    :heart:
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    this was way deep gurl...
    your pieces make me think for awhile
    because at first i may not grasp the full intensity
    then i'll read it a couple mo times...and be like WoW
    that was crucial...as is this piece...creative joint
    one love
    khasm
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your poetry is so uplifting. I liked this piece:)
     
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    It's like bro. Khasm has headphones connected 2 my mind, cuz it's like that.

    Once again, U have done it 2 me.

    Very, very nice.
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam...for all your replies but I gather this piece might be a little vague
    ...lol...sometimes I think I get to deep for my own good...let me explain this piece a little...

    This piece is about the effect a person can have on another and how
    their love can seem almost divine and often is…divine…as well as how
    often times we're changed forever as a result of that experience particularly in love.
    The scripture and revelation parts are metaphorical…(the essence of a person)
    I realized that it was a lil’ cloudy after a reader ask me some in depth questions on it.
    But it’s about a natural man that is divine…to a woman and the level upon which
    they exist…a soul mate connection…non earthly.

    But thank you all for the love…particularly Khasm & Positive…you guys are sooo great!, even when I’m vague…

    Much love, Peace :grouphug: :heart:
     
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