Black Poetry : The biography of _______

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  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He was 5 when they got his pops.
    The nig*a was a rolling stone.
    Wouldn't stop, till the day he got shot.
    Mom at home stressed out,
    Smokes lots.
    Lil' man discontent with his poverty
    Hits the block.
    Because mom sold all the food stamps for crack rock.
    It's ironic that a nig*a born to a cocaine addict mother
    Is posted on the corner selling the same sh*t to another.
    It's only natural though because
    The hood don't breed morality.
    The streets don't teach humanity.
    And no one can really judge you.
    They can't criticize the path you walk.
    They dont know what you went through.
    They weren't in your shoes,
    neither was I too.
    I'm just the narrarator
    -a story teller
    Telling your tale with a poetic spin.
    They can read your story now, then 10 times again
    But regardless, in the end
    They haven't ever lived it.
    Nothing makes you feel sh1t
    quite like experience.
    :thinking:

    Picture paragraphs unloaded- wise words bein quoted....
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  2. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Biography

    Noone can Judge another. We are all Ancestors of Adam and Eve.
    Very Nice Write.
     
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    iwannabe

    your on a tyte roll , but slow down we have a limit to the
    front page allow some of the other work you have to move
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  4. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL- my fault Brother, I guess i should have read the rules better, but afterall I am new. Wont happen again.... :eek:oops:
     
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    we humbly thank you for understanding and respecting our few Rules
    we also love all the energy you bring poeticly and collectively

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  6. watzinaname

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    Experience is the best teacher, although there are some experiences that I wish we could simply learn through others so that we wouldn't have to know the pain first hand. Tight drop.
     
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    Really thought provoking. I like the line about the crack addict mother then the son sellin it to another. Things that make u go hmmmm :thinking:
     
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