Black Poetry : The Big One's Won by Hook Line & Sinker

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  1. candeesweet

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    In the months of still warmness
    Taking the tackle out for the day
    Selling the attitude of sink line and hook um
    Teaching your youngins how it's done for survival
    The see of waters always brings a pressured stillness
    Until Da Bate gets caught
    Hands begin to shake
    Bobbin' the waters as normal
    All the sudden all goes limp
    Son, have to keep still fish are tricky
    Don't get sidetracked with your iphone email bings
    Patience is a virtue
    Da Bate will get stole inevitably
    Just change the warm & try again with "this" slimy bait son.
     
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    Do tell, candeesweet.
    I really like this!
     
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    Inspired piece sis!
     
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