Quiet Poetry Lounge : ~The Betrayal ~

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Took my soul
    Claim to hold my heart
    As I open up..
    Knowing it was true
    Now I am left so blue
    You knew I was scare
    In the lions den wit a flare
    Of drama..aint me
    You allow all to hurt me..
    Promising it will never touch me
    Protector of my heart
    Lover of my soul…
    You allow it to hurt me
    Glassy tears
    Nightmares of
    Betrayal once more
    As I place my trust in misguide
    Thoughts of what was
    Longing for the pain of betrayal to fade
    But not this time…as tears run
    From the much disappointment
    Mental drain collapse heart
    Lost hope…..within the dark I go
    Stepping out of the light
    Hurt much to deep…
    To stay inside….
    shootin pains bends my spirit
    In a hush you run so across the sky I go
    All I got left is my pride
    For you almost broke my stride
    And wipe away my joy
    But I learned from you never let a soul still
    My joy…..this was a foe
    But I aint the one for drama
    What a friend I thought you
    Was no matter what
    We were to be until the end….

    untitled life
    (C) 2004
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    That's tight...express yourself...very emotional.

    :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    life can bring twist and turns
    to off set the journey but faith
    is the true moment of time

    we all pass in this path at some point in life
    i've been down this road too many tyme
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truly a road that many have sorrowfully tread, I know I have. Very emotively expressed.
     
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    Gurl...go ahead...brush ya shoulder off... :grouphug:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Money glad you likes....peace from an Angel ;)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for your words of wisdom... you always know what to say to make it look a little brighter....Peace to you from me :grouphug:
    Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support on dis...what dont kill us makes us stronger... :wink:
    Peace
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    ya know I already did and moved forward :) ....thanks for the reply peace my sister....Angel
     
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    Nice poem MBA I enjoyed this alot. :)
     
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