Black Haiku : The Best Part

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bootzey, Sep 11, 2008.

  1. Bootzey

    Bootzey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The best part of me
    Not between my legs
    But My heart. Mind. Soul​
     
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    I am the best part
    My spirit comes from the heart
    I live to love hard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beyond compare da
    part of me best is da gift
    i pose unto u
     
  4. Bootzey

    Bootzey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is that gift, Rich?
    Is it useful? Or will I
    Have to assemble?
     
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    No assembling
    required to feel da best of
    my depth in part sis
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The best part of us
    Is that something we all feel
    When we all join hands
     
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    The best part
    Is working to create
    The best of anything​
     
  8. Bootzey

    Bootzey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where do I find it?
    Where should I look for it, Rich?
    Within or without?
     
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    Start from within me
    to da outter of oneself
    and there u find me


    Look deeper within
    da depth of me is in you
    there u shell find all

    Each outward pose is
    the dewelling in goodness
    da best part of me
     
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