Black Poetry : the best gift i recieved yesterday (for poetic delight)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Dec 26, 2001.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .... was seeing you last night


    the tedious hours of coming here were worth seeing you in just a moment's time
    i was like Solomon coming from the opposite ends to see what i have heard of the queen of Sheba
    and found everything to be true and much more..
    your wisdom and style were worth many more miles..

    your whole table was set!!
    you are sooo beautiful and a feast for the eyes to see
    pretty eyes
    pretty teeth but most of all- pretty feet
    pretty feet!!!!
    5'5 with the right size thighs and perfect breasts that graced my chest with humility
    the aura of your pr(essence) and smile outshined the christmas lights and the stars which were bright..

    i won't lie i was shy don't ask why..

    i wanted to tell my peeps to step coz for a minute they were getting tooo comfortable on the love seat... right??
    maybe it was b/c you had on the Brian Mcknight as i entered
    ~~never felt this way about love~~

    last night as we spoke coming to conclusions i knew that there was more
    last night as we spoke coming to conclusions i knew that there was more
    last night as we spoke coming to conclusions i knew that there was more

    our last words were let it flow

    p.s
    so chinese is alright 2night huh??
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    j'hiah

    beautifully written
    one most def be of worthyness........:)
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bomb:

    the only word to describe her.

    thanx $$RICH$$
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the style
    with the humerous touch :toast:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    j'h

    nice nice nice
    man
    go head playa

    DSSNY
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    i'm loving this flow-on the real

    :love:


    pd





    .....check out the upcoming sequel to-the reason(s) i love u
     
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    i was the first to read this one but i wanted for PD to reply before i spoke. Poet, you have allowed the heavens to shine such a beauty ray of Love over the garden that i must wear shades when i glance from the meadow. Your words here are deeply felt and i understand where you are. I have been there myself. I pray that love growing will reap a bountiful harvest for your words leave you

    ***naked and not ashamed***

    Many bleassings to you both...

    Big Bro' watching over the meadow...
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JehiahPoetic.


    sweet lil' brother of mine...

    i can't even begin to tell you how
    beautiful & sweet this was!! i
    think i've read it about 25 times
    now!! (no lie)... & i'm still not
    prepared to give you a response
    that is worthy of the scribe...

    InfiniteLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    big sis, peach of poetry, Georgia's finest, mocha coffee drinker,

    where ya been!@!! you're about to catch it!!:flame:
    :censored: :maddd:

    maaan, i miss you. you better have an xplanation.
    i better hear one reaaaalll quick!!
     
  10. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah...

    i downloaded your photo

    it's a nice picture

    i told you so

    check your email

    peace

    poeticd
     
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