Black Poetry : The beginning haiku

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Mar 2, 2004.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    egos stench the wind
    causing blak's pen to strike hard
    the riot begins


    blakverb
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is it 5-7-5? it's a shame I don't know but lemme try...

    picturing sunrise
    the glow against the midnight
    I am healed by You...

    (well you can tell me the rules of haiku later, this was fun though)

    Love Ya
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  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir bruh the true beginning
    as da whip of da pen clash
    flow on tyte drop
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Write some more Blakverb
    Pennin that haiku flava
    Quiet riot flow
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice brother black...im feelin it....
    -story
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i loved it...
    come into the haiku forumn
    and share some more..
    nice...nice...
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it was our egos that cast us into utter darkness of sin that evokes a constant struggle within ..... Humble Ones Self ..... New Beginnings Born Again ..... Dig this piece ....
     
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    With ease of the pen
    The beginning just started it
    Strong he stand in da mist

    As da riot begins…
    Floatin smooth across the canvas
    As blak’s pen strikes hard

    flow on tight drop
    digging your flow indeed
    fo sho do yo thang

    :coffee:
     
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