Black Poetry : THE BEAUTY OF CALM

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ice blue tranquil waters before me.
    Newly blossomed flowers all around me.
    Warm sun gracing my smiling face.

    Joy and elation
    tingling
    up and down
    my spine.

    A blanket
    of green grass beneath my naked feet.
    Gentle caressess, from him, tantilizing my body.
    Love and contentment in the soul of my heart.

    Sweet red wine
    easing down
    my parched throat.

    Soft jazz
    whispering in my ear.
    Light summer breezes
    fluttering against my silken skin.

    Laying in your protective arms,
    feeling no more fear or uncertainty,
    sensing only
    the beauty of calm.
     
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    Sierra, this is wonderful!

    The sense of calm in a beautiful place-
     
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    "Love and contentment in the soul of my heart."

    Your heart lives in the beauty of calm...:)
     
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    very beautifully expressed....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved it so sweet and calm......
    let ya ink continue
     
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    :toast: wow, i was feeling that, grass under my feet, warm wine, nice
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi 1poetsought, :wave:

    :thanks: so much!! I agree, a sense of calm is a beautiful thing!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi N Deep,

    You have brought such joy to my heart with your kind words.!!

    ~Sierra~ :)
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi LovelyGoldenOne, :)

    Thank you!! :jumping:

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich, :wave:

    It makes me so happy you liked this one!! Thanks so much for writing!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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