Black Poetry : The Beauty Of A Woman (My first Post in Destee)

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  1. D-Rock

    D-Rock Member MEMBER

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    From a very young age, I've been in love with you;

    But your venomious posion, I never knew;

    The re-tractable claws in which, you use to defeat the beast;

    Like a Praying Mantis, using her lover to feast;

    You work with a methodical elegance and are a seductive genius;

    Leaving men blind, except for the eye of our penis;

    Have us mesmerized;

    By the length of your thighs;

    The sparkle in your eyes;

    The curves of your hips;

    The sweetness of your lips;

    The smell of your perfume;

    The way you work over a room;

    Your soft, silky skin;

    Rendering us, im-mobile from within;

    The sultry way, in which you walk;

    The quiet intelligence, in which you talk;

    It doesn't matter, what color, or race..... shape, or size;

    Every woman, has the power to mesmerize;

    The beauty of a woman has no boundary;

    They spin their webbs, and have us surrounded;

    If it's a game, then I lose everytime;

    One walks by and I stop on a dime;

    Wonder what she feels like and if she could be mine;

    Maybe, this one....is the right one;

    Or is she just the next one...

    Venom, set to stun;

    Might as well, just surrender;

    To the superior gender;

    Because there's nothing we can do....when we've been summond;

    By the beauty of a true black woman.
     
  2. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome D-rock :)

    This is cool right here
     
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    :toast:

    Nice piece!



    As I read it, I was started singing L.T.D.
    That's what it brought to my mind.


    I often think of music with poetry. For me, the two are intricately linked because good poetry is lyrical. :toast:
     
  4. D-Rock

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    Thanks Mike and CherryBlossom....agreed...music and poems are relative of one another. I believe poetry is food for the mind and music is food for the spirit. Either way...let it be plentiful :)
     
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    Hello and Welcome D-Rock...

    Alright now, I heard that!
    I also enjoyed your flow of words and appreicate you choosing to share them with us.

    You've made a great entrance into Destee's poetic playground.



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    i can truly hear your voice as I read this piece love the read!
     
  7. D-Rock

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    Lavette112....Thank you very much!

    Cocobutterskyn...Your words are respected and reflected...in the beauty that will forever resignate from the outside in...you are beautiful with every inch of your Cocobutterskyn :)
     
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    awesome joint well felt .........welcome to da poetic playground of destee.com
     
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    $$Rich$$ Thanks for the welcome...I look forward to my own progression through Destee.com
     
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