Black Poetry : The Beauty In You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Oct 15, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I were to create a list of all the things
    I love about you
    I would have to start with the sweet things
    that come from your lips
    Your charm, strength, and confidence

    The intelligence in your mind
    provoke thoughts inside of mine
    Your laid back attitude
    you always seem to be in control
    No matter the temperature in the room

    Like the calm in the mist of the storm
    You demonstrate constant love not harm
    Even when you’re a little grumpy
    It never deters me from still wanting to be
    Somewhere close to you
    so you can rub off on me

    You’re a breathe of fresh air
    Like a mornings glory
    Your not just a chapter
    you’re the book the entire story

    You make me smile in that special way
    You know that way…
    when your so touched and moved
    You can't seem to articulate or find
    the right words to say
    At those moments I get lost in
    The Beauty in You

    The Beauty in you
    ignites the Beauty in me
    Makes my heart softer
    I wanna receive all you offer
    Give you all I got.....

    Show you how the The Beauty In you
    Has made such an impression on me
     
  2. That Jones Boy

    That Jones Boy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very good it flows well and has good rymes.
     
  3. rapchild

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    yes i the beauty in u
    is shown from da words u write
    every word is beautiful n sounds right


    i love it.1
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If only the world can move in this order...
    ~One soul, Touches another~
    ...what a wonderful world this would be.
    Beautiful piece sis...keep that feeling.
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That Jones Boy:
    Thank you for the visit and the words of kindness.

    rapchild:
    aaah that was sweet of you to say.
    Thanks for the luv.


    Hey my sista queen:
    I try to embrace all that makes
    my heart and soul happy.
    You know I so apprecite you stopping by
    it is always a pleasure. Your words are
    always so encouraging to me. Thanks so much.


    Much Luv to you all
     
  6. TreasureEyes

    TreasureEyes Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright My Sista!

    Just simply beautifullllllll my sis ...... :darts:
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i luv your poetry 4everluv:blowkiss:
     
  8. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH YES MAAM! THIS PIECE IS ALMOST AS BEAUTIFUL AS YOU SISTAH
    VERY DELIGHTFUL FLO, KINDA REMINDS ME OF AN OCEAN VIEW, VERY CALMING

    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
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    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is great when our queens experience the blessings of beauty. I am happy for you 4ever. Fantastic flow !!
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this is very nice

    i'm feeling this

    and if you wrote it for someone special

    they should really feel it with no problems

    peace LUV
     
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