Black Poetry : The Beach!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Mar 29, 2001.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stepped outside
    and took a look at the sky.
    The sky was bright blue
    as I thought about what I could do.
    I looked out to the ocean's waves
    then over to the cliff's caves.
    And walked over to the grained sand
    and picked it up with my hand.
    I let if fall at a slow rate
    and the wind made it evaporate.
    The water rushed over my feet
    and I felt my heart beat.
    Then heard the waves break
    and it ruptures the feelings of a lake.
    What a beautiful sight
    as the sun shines so bright.
    I sat on a sand hill
    and felt my eyes fill.
    I thought as all the sound ceased
    The world should be like this, in peace.
    The sun began to fade
    as all the colors were made.
    But then it was all gone
    And I sat in the darkness alone.
    One_Love
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aiight now One,

    Welcome to Destee's - the place we now call home!!!

    Peace
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  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    beautiful flow OneLove

    Thank you for sharing it here
    Please make yourself at home!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Welcome onelove, This is a tight flow....I likes..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the day past love this drop of beauty
     
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    WELCOME..

    THIS WAS A WELL RECIEVED POEM,
    HOPE TO READ MORE...
    :heart:

     
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    Such a pretty picture painted, and then, it seems as though it's all gone, until the next sunrise. Enjoyed this flow.
     
  8. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :crying: oh aww...


    i feld this ...





    know this so well....



    almost ashamed ..after it in front of god ....

    lord doing his best to do his paintings in the sky....




    and ...


    than that moment ....




    but he understands that to...




    we human ...




    we are not ment to be alone...








    i loved this poet...






    much strength to you

    and gods essence..and warmth.






    LoveAuroraflower:heart:
     
  9. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i had to say it again...





    this was verry wel posed ...




    realy

    it was a reflexion of a moment i had last week..



    and manny times before...



    it realy touched me..









    but stay close to god



    in the end he makes everything alright..














    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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