Black Poetry : the Battle

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by honeebrownsuga, Sep 28, 2001.

  1. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    What do I do when my body says yes
    and my mind says digress
    while releasing the notion
    that moving in slow motion
    with you engulfed by me
    is what I want tremendously
    as you pull me closely
    and I melt like butter
    hearing the deep raspiness surrounding the words that you mutter
    while light bites about my neck I am enduring
    though piercing are masked by the sting
    of adrenaline that flows
    from my head to my toes
    Should I go with the flow
    rather than say no
    to your “may I have this dance”
    similar to a parallel stance
    where our bodies are intertwined
    and too much to bear chills travel down my spine
    repetitively
    as you hold me forcefully
    taking full control over me
    as I hopelessly,
    almost effortlessly
    try to break free
    to appear to be avoiding your conquer of me
    though burying your flag in my land is what I’d love to see
    Or do I let you continue
    to do what you know I want you too
    because I, like you, know how badly I want you
    to grab me by the neck
    and sex me ‘til you **** near break my neck
    while locking my hands with your hands firmly
    as if I would ever try to leave
    after feeling what I feel having you inside of me
    stroking in and out steadily
    with gentle kisses and nibbles all over my body
    causing me to pulsate uncontrollably
    you and I both know exactly where I want to be
    To miss this experience would ail me regretfully

    © honeebrownsuga-ljf 2001
     
  2. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honee,

    Liked your piece, the battle can
    be an everyday thing for some.
    Nicely written.
    :eek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL WRITTEN

    LOVE HOW U SPRAYED THIS OUT TO CANVAS
    AS I WELCOME U TOO THE FLOW OF FREE
    THE PLAYGROUND OF DESTEE'S WELCOME
    BROWN SUGA AND ALL ........WELCOME IN
    NOW WERE FRIENDS SOON TO BE KIN!:D
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank u! :D I appreciate your welcome and comments.
    I was somewhat leery about posting, but you have
    brought my comfort level to a much higher plane. :peace:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    honeebrown...

    now, you know you don' brought dis...and i'm loving the way you laid it out there for alla us to SWEAT ova.:) thanks for the pick-me-up.
     
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    VirtuousDove Active Member MEMBER

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    Nice! You have me reminiscing of my love, I'm now missing.

    VirtuousDove
     
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