Black Haiku : the bathtub

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  1. deepy

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    long and wide clawed feet
    waters littered with orchids
    inviting us in....

    a toe touches warmth
    hands spraying wetness up...up
    the claws never move...




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    sharp long deep wiffer
    bubbles splash beckon us in
    yet no movement still



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    the large towel drops..
    brown bodies ready to merge
    ancient bathtub waits..





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    moving inward ahhh!
    two bodies cascading down
    splash endlessly

    skin to skin holding
    to blot backz and stillness set
    the stage for beauty
     
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    Petals dance in suds
    Bodies make a passionate
    splash, all lathered up...



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