Black Poetry : The Basis of Actions

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  1. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Basis of Actions



    When man sleeps his objectives,
    of a true liberation is forfeit.
    The beliefs that saves the armor of great Kings.
    Cause and effects of Human life shall prosper.
    It’s the honor of a man,
    who stands by the proclamation ,
    of justice. Which is implemented ,
    a world of humanity and love.
    The basis of actions is to lead,
    the proclamation of justice,
    is when man takes control of family and self.
    If you crawl like a worm ,
    you shall be stepped on by whose ever concern.

    I ask the torture I feel is it lonely?
    Is it not knowing one that lives ,
    within repression of motivations,
    Why do I fear to reclaim my rightful place.
    When there is no where to hide,
    I the torch of self, understanding the roles,
    of a leader why is it so hard for me to gripe,
    the constitutions of a liberation of honor,
    among my stool and self, I run in hide.
    I cry the sounds of the sparrow,
    when the dove has died.

    The image of a warrior who wears a mask,
    who hides behind the women’s skirt tail,
    and blames her for his like of self worth.
    The free mind inward path of liberation has resolved.
    Cause an effects of human life.

    Thy father has given power to tread,
    on the serpents and scorpions,
    all over power of the enemy,
    and nothing by any means shall hurt you,
    none with stand in rejoice,
    because the names are written in heaven.
    Through the basis’s of actions you declined.

    The actions of mans attempt,
    shall be the glory of great hopes.
    Which man is created only by the divine,
    specific action,
    of creations that any can be called the son of God,
    those who live upon the flesh is flesh, God is Spirit.
    The basis of action cannot be found.


    Mythological images, wearing the scent of death,
    buried deep in the turmoil of dark.
    Denial wide than the river of the black Nile.


    Man that honors another man,
    who refuses to rise above evil,
    and march for divine love ,
    the words of the devil,
    an refuse to live the words of God.
    Constant cries of thunder, legacies of retractions,
    taunting the invoices, crying let me free.
    The basics signs of actions can be death,
    by ones own hands.




    Shall feel the whip of the rod.
    There is only one God.
    Who is it that fears man,
    an not fear God,
    Thy shall have no other God before me, said thy God.

    Within the revenge of satins,
    basic indoctrinations of actions,
    satin will lay hands on you,
    persecute you delivering you up,
    to the synagogues of hell,
    and into prisons of minds,
    being brought before kings ,
    and rulers for Gods name sake,
    and turn to you for a testimony,
    and watch you turn your back on thy father,
    turning deaf ear to his rules of actions,
    the basic of actions, man closed his mind,
    to the laws of thy God, a man who refuse to lead self,
    and the faith in thy God,
    that would have brought him across.



    The Basis Of Actions


    Man that honors another man,
    who refuses to rise above bondage of self,
    and march for divine Unity ,
    the words of the demised,
    an refuse to live the words of God.
    Shall feel the whip of the rod.
    There is only one God.
    Who is it that fears man,
    an not fear God.



    Explicitly spiritual matter of no meditation of thoughts,
    Determine through the dark windows,
    The manifestations will take place no more.
    The basis of actions shall be in voided,
    until loyalty to self take place.


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    Copywrite 2002
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    d*mn girl! i love your writing!
     
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    This was sooooo powerful!!!
    It is so amazing how you word our imperfections so perfectly!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    That was wonder ful. I like when you write like that. You are truly a gifted poet. Flow on'

    Much Love,
    Foxy
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blessing foxylady and you are a master at your craft. I am truly to be blessed with brothers and sisters as your self.
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was truly a deep and thought provoking piece "you blow me away each time I read your work" Awesome delviery and wordplay... Keep expressing yourself from all that you hold within

    Blessings
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  7. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my sister
     
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