Black Short Stories : The Ballad Of She

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  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She met this man one day
    dressed real fancy, he made her day
    laughed at all the jokes he said
    fell for all the lines he read
    he said she was fyne
    with her big behind
    said he took one glance
    and he was in a trance
    said his nature rose for sure
    the moment she walk into the door
    she was so flattered by this man
    she couldn't breathe, lost all sense
    she almost buckled to her knees
    took them lines literally
    she was ready to please
    and before she knew
    they were off to go... sleep

    he........

    rocked her

    rocked her

    all night long

    then....he rocked

    some more til early dawn
    she couldn't believe the love she felt
    when he was done she spoke her heart
    said she loved him and never want to part
    he rose up and shook his suit
    then began dressing, put on his boots
    she looked real puzzled.... to him she said
    "Last night meant something...."
    and he bowed his head
    got his coat and headed for the door
    then he stop and face her, coolly he said
    "Baby.....life is chances, we take our risk
    when I first saw you, I couldn't resist
    one thing to remember, about men like me
    is we always want..... what we see
    I'll tell you lies, even fantasized
    thats what you want to hear
    but once I get the lovin
    theres nothin left to give"
    he walked out the door.....
    but peeked in once more.......he said

    "Hey.......

    thats reality!"

    :eeek:



    Epiphany(c)2001
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  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEN WILL WE LEARN,

    That is a precious gift. It's the last part of us a man should receive. Only long after......... he has proven he deserves to receive it. Not to forget, some can fake a long time....so we gots to be patient, observant and not hard up..... men can pick up on that......some women wear it on their foreheads.

    This my dear sister, was a very good read. Thanks.

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
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  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco....

    I agree.....may be a bit old fashioned
    but it works for me......savor the moment
    of the mind, and the body soon follows...


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    hold up, now...

    it's not good to hold out too long, either. even a good man will get tired of beggin'...and move on. there's a fine line between being patient and being realistic. PERSONALLY, I DON'T HIT IT AND QUIT IT...unless it wasn't worth hittin' in the first place.:)

    it's more a question of taking the time to get to know your partner. too many SISTAHS are too busy listening to the lines to get to know a brutha. men are very obvious...if you take the time to get to know us.

    loved the flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'll agree wit baller coz dis be my way of it all ......nice piece of art
     
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