Black Poetry : The balcony Stalk

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE BALCONY STALK
    By Andre Austin

    Ok what happened Friday night dre?

    I just parked the Cadillac
    I enter the grounds of her Apt Complex
    I’m ready, my mind is on the Sex
    For I’ve already sent her the Text

    She is on the third floor wing
    Her balcony suite looks down on the pool
    I’m nervous, but maintaining my cool
    As the moon shines on the water,
    I’m on one knee looking something like a fool

    Its 3am, I start the ghetto serenade
    From the balcony I can see her emerging shade
    (Oh lord thanx she hears my voice)
    Pretending I’m Hamlet or an Othello
    I simply said “hello“:

    “Its me, I’m ready
    Can we work it out?
    Can we get back together?
    Can I lay my head on your pillow tonight?”

    ( I didn’t believe it. I won her over, playing the home sick rover)

    She came down the steps
    Wearing a white braw and white virtuous pannies
    She was pure eye candy
    And it was surely time for a snack
    It was time for the Mack

    I carried her back up the stairs , we both now naked outside
    I didn’t care
    I was in love and it felt so good

    Both of us now looking down from the balcony
    Black love from the sky above
    Ready to rest in her silky sensational sheets
    I rise with the sun making miracles
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :em4700:Making up can be easy or hard
    I like the steps you took on this piece
    like a movie... i had pictured it
    very nice and sweet

    keep flowing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome write bruh this was like step by step !
     
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