Black Poetry : The back of his neck!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Dec 29, 2002.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The back of is neck, draws my hand
    whenever I am near him...
    The swirl of the smooth black kitchen
    touched by Carribbean ancestors
    and origins so foreign they created
    their own race.

    The back of his neck , always bows
    involutarily as I voluntarily erase
    the pressures of the day...the back
    of his neck mesmerizes me and
    chases all my stressors away.

    The back of is neck, as I smooth
    the furrowed rows into place
    a smile creeps across your face
    You smooth the fabric of my thigh
    I see rainbows reflected from
    the very corner of your eye

    The backof his neck, will always be
    my achilles heel, a place I will always
    want to feel. I get a chill everytime
    I touch
    the
    back
    of
    his
    neck!
    Bjs(C)2002
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now look at u .....
    ya never touch me like dat!!! LOL

    i really like da flow in dis act of ummmm!
    back of da neck thing
     
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    ~touching the back of my neck~

    I need a lil shave back there

    but anyway this was dope
    liked the concept of this

    one luv
     
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    OOOOKKKKK!!!! Hey mslucious....Here's the back of my neck:grin:
     
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    Ok msluciousb! if the back of is neck is as you say, i got one question: GIRLFRIEND, CAN YOU HOOK ME UP WITH HIS BROTHA? :)

    LOL
    i was truly feelin' that one.

    Kimdricka A.K.A. Kim
     
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    OH MY God!

    Peep this. I met my wife at this college party. I asked her to dance to "Down Low" remix/ R.Kelly.

    I take her out on the floor. Our hips slide into the beat. (you know how infectious R's baselines are). And this girl does the wierdest thing. She caressed the back of my neck.

    And she didn't gauge it or nothing. She just let her fingers sort of tickle like baby fingers on piano keys.

    I never forgot that.

    For dogs its behind the ear. For me, its the back of my neck!

    HOLLA!
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hahahahahaha! I loved that you loved it!

    Thanks all of you for responding. Bishop since I am single again watch what you say to me? LOL < OLMEC that was how it started... it's now to this very day my favorite spot on a man...among others! LOL ...To all of my dear scribes have some
    one touch the back of your neck softly like "stroking piano keys" and you will be hooked...My sista he has a brotha but he is married ...so sorry! There are plenty of necks go explore..LOL
    Thanks for enjoying this piece I enjoyed sharing!

    Blessings on Ya House!:D
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the back of his

    neck when he's drivin or when we are sitting and just watchin the tube. Something bout his bald head and the back of his neck that makes me.....well sho nuff enjoyed this one here mslb.



    One
     
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    The back of his neck , always bows
    involutarily as I voluntarily erase
    the pressures of the day...the back
    of his neck mesmerizes me and
    chases all my stressors away.

    WOW

    great read like always
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved that you loved it!

    It is nothing more pleasing than giving pleasure!
    And nothing more peasurable than being pleased by someone!

    Blessings On ya House!
    Be pleased with the back of his/her neck and give them love and much respect!:D
     
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