Black Poetry : The Back Door

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The back door
    is how you flow
    never used the front door,
    it's too obvious, you know.
    Gotta enter on
    the sneak tip,
    can't be upfront,
    no script to flip.
    There you go again, dang
    nearly tripped over the doorman,
    tippin round to the rear
    as quiet as you can.
    It's not that you have a
    special delivery, naw.
    And, no, you haven't memorized
    every 007 flick you ever saw.
    That's just the way you live,
    cunning, conniving always with a plot.
    Got more mystery in ya than
    the Bermuda Triangle has got.
    And you have your lackeys too,
    those hired to take the heat
    when the hounds catch the scent
    of those ever creeping feet.
    Slithering snake wraps itself
    tightly around the truth,
    like a boa constricting all
    traces of honesty, simply uncouth.
    You can roll out the red carpet
    all you like, provide a limo and more,
    being on the up and up is not
    the direction you're headed for.
    I'm not gonna throw up my hands,
    just gonna chill, no more to say.
    Cause I've heard on the down low that
    the back door is actually the gateway,
    to hell.
    Watch your step.
    I heard that first
    drop is a doozy....
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte...
     
  3. Earthly Allure

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    Truly feeling this my man. One love
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, LovelyGoldenOne for the props on this.
    Glad you let me know you're feeling this, thanks Earthly Allure. But, lol, I'm a sistah.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    enjoyed the read
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright!

    I liked this one watz....
    Lovin the floE :star:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your support mzblkangel.
    Glad to know you liked this one Nita, thanks.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a pow wow !!!
    tyte drop sistah
     
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    :wave: Watz...
    From now on...FRONT door for me :laugh: :laugh: ...
    keeping it real...I really like this piece. thanks for sharing
     
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    shady people deserve to be talked about....
    nice joint
    one love
    khasm
     
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