Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Baby

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Aug 13, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can't describe how i feel inside
    whatever comes out will be a lie
    because I simply can't explain
    whats going on in my heart, soul and brain
    one minute I really think I am okay
    the next my life seems in utter disarray
    i'm not hiding things from you
    I really just don't know what to do
    I am not asking for anything
    certainly no wedding ring
    or you to make up my mind
    i am just searching to find
    what it is you are ready to give
    because this baby will live
    and i don't want to tell you
    that i don't want to pursue
    a relationship but this causes
    so many other pauses
    in my life and yours
    don't want to make you run out the door . . .

    then i think, I think real hard
    why i am bothering to give you regard
    its not like i made this baby on my own
    but i know already i will raise him alone
    and i guess i am disappointed
    but i know my soul will be anointed
    i'm trying to keep it real
    to explain to you how I feel
    don't ask if you wanted a lie
    be uncomfortable when I begin to cry
    I am being torn inside
    trying to take this all in stride
    we've been friends for so long
    always keeping eachother strong
    seemed natural for me to turn to you
    when my relationship with him was through
    in your arms i found solace
    with you peace came any place
    as long as I was in your presence
    basking in your essence.
    and, now i don't even want to dial
    your number, tell myself not worthwhile
    i want you to call me
    i want you to tell me you're coming to see
    how i am doing and if there's anything i need
    (I told you lately how all i do is feed)
    i keep looking out the window
    trying to not let you overshadow
    the joy I feel about having our baby.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautiful the love of a child
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your words $$RICH$$, preicate the feed back
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome poetically sprayed when u flow
     
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    this baby is gon be so blessed because this baby is gon have U in its life :)
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can't stop these feelings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let them flow a love for a child is so beautiful and warm
    and a togetherness
     
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    oh wow
    this is a wonderful
    wonderful flow
    ah yes
    the love of the child
    is so devine
    very nice
    feeling your love
    many blessing
    Peace
     
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    that was too deep
     
  10. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks, wish it didn't end like it did
     
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