Black Poetry : The Art Of A Man...Well MY Man...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jun 13, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know, i know its a little long....sorry but the pen kept on goin'...
    enjoy!!



    Perfectly crafted
    In a way to spark my laughter
    Over six feet of heavenly attraction
    To feed my dire reactions
    Starting from the beautiful head
    That travels down my body in the bed
    The head crowned with glorious curls
    That I twist my fingers in and makes jealous girls
    Those eyebrows so distinctly shaped
    with no wax or tweezing or beauty debates
    just naturally perfect in my eyes
    and of course in the eyes of those I despise
    those eyes that I've already written of
    that can read into my soul and wrap me in a hug
    the nose that is so carefully crafted
    by Gods helpers, for on going attraction
    the lips, just the right shade of red, brown, and pink
    thick, luscious and temptingly sweet
    the way you lick them to moisten the skin
    with that tongue that can do so many tricks from within
    from sliding on my lips, to flicking on my chest
    from twisting in my mouth, to laying on my neck
    from sliding down my stomach to slowly kiss my navel
    and gliding down lower to make me scream like I didn't think I was able
    but okay that's enough I have to continue
    but I just gotta let you know that your tongue is like ooooooo!ooooooo!
    your skin is so taintingly, velvety smooth
    like your voice that always has me in the mood
    the deep, sweet, baritone soundwaves
    that lovingly sing to me in every kind of way
    I even adore those cute little ears
    that listen to the screams that you make me shout so clear
    and the trail of hair in a line, that forms a goatee so fine
    it makes you look so **** good, that I rejoice you being mine
    the sturdiness of the chin that can rest upon my shoulder
    when your sad and in distress, or burdens have hit you like a boulder
    the sweetly shaped neck that I love to kiss and caress
    to relieve all the pains that have caused you stress
    then there are your shoulders that know my tears so well
    because on them I cried when my life was a living hell
    the back that I know so well as I seize you in a hug
    the one I massage and rub down so well that it makes you confess your love
    and the arms that wrapped around me to squeeze my pain into you
    they surrounded all my scares and fears that pushed me to be through
    and I can’t forgot those soft but manly hands that stroke mine everyday
    the way you hold my hands and kiss them with the lips of foreplay
    those fingers that softly brush over my face during the night
    tracing my lips, hips, and breast, and you say i’m a lovely sight
    the same fingers that can make me come like I never thought I could
    the ones that slide deep inside of me to feel my wetness as they should
    the chest I laid my head upon after we made love so many nights
    with hands I pushed this chest away after we had a fight
    that stomach that I love to embrace and tickle just to hear you laugh
    the stomach that I lovingly punch when we wrestle with fun and laughs
    the happy trail of hair that travels down to my favorite place
    the place I love to tease you at and make your worries erase
    if I had to give a letter grade on that place I love so much
    I happily and willingly shout “baby, I give you an A plus”!!
    that waist I love to press on mine so I can feel you shape of manhood
    the one I love to ride over and over so that I can hear you say “oh that’s so good”
    the waist that lays on top of me with the rest of your body thrusting
    it makes me moan in exctasy of the love you and I are entrusting
    that sexy little butt of yours that I love to just squeeze
    and when you do the same to me, it brings me to my knees
    those shapely legs that I know so well as they lay next to me
    during the night as i’m in your arms surrounded so lovingly
    even those feet that play with mine under the dinner table so playfully
    so that we laugh like small children who run around crazily
    whew!
    now i’ve gone through everything about you physically
    your perfect and your all mine, just mine
    I honestly love you baby...
     
  2. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was amazing! You went over every aspect of his body, incredible!
     
  3. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GURL..... it must be nice... this flow is tyte... indeed you painted a sexy picture... betta stop painting so well... may have those haters looking for yo man... keep da flows coming... i'm lovin them :)....

    peace
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww thanks so much skin deep:)...

    yeah it is nice.......very nice...lol...thanks alot....they already look unfortunately, lol......thanks again NADIA BINTA...
     
  5. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well they might look but they betta not touch!!!... your the future wife and i know you'll be down for the fight :)...

    peace my sistah... much love :)
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww thanks girl...and yep i will be down for the fight! they look and i try to touch....but they can't get past me...
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    anymore inputs?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah!!! beautiful way u scribe me ............lol
    this was awesome got me wanna be dat man in the bed
    hot sexy scribe sis.......u know i'm lovin it
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, oh yeah, how'd u know i was talkin' about u????was it THAT obvious?? i'll try to be more subtle next time, lol....
    **** i got u wantin' that? wow, lol
    thanks rich:)
     
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    I know that you LOOOOOVVE THAT MAN! gurl, this was sood.....that I'm starting to fall in love with him :blush: