Black Poetry : The All's Will will be done

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blkthunder, Dec 24, 2002.

  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I write
    to ignite
    the souls to fire
    Heaven desire
    for them to reach higher
    TO remember the Supreme
    whom we call King
    Eternally existing
    Heavens resisting
    the temptation to cry
    to flood the earth with tears so nothing remains dry
    Fleets of arks are being built
    While blood is spilt
    on the land.
    Soon there will be nothing but sand
    They seek outer space
    But none can race
    faster than the One
    When the warth come all will be done
    The Alls Will will be done
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truth is the best form of poetry!

    Excellent piece and good subject matter, one error in the last stanza, on the word "warth" I think it should be "war"!

    Blessings On Ya Houses!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u scribe the true vision of many !
    poet ya looking good
     
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