Black Poetry : The agony of a souljah

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  1. Locust

    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Lord
    so much i have to say
    so much in my heart to share
    when time reveals no meaning
    whom can you believe in
    feeling like the good Shepherd
    that lost one in His flock
    I succumb to fear no more
    furthermore the story never ends
    a life filled with rain and pain
    Oh lord why do teardrops drop
    like rainfall-drops
    whenever my pen stops?
    I hope I get to ghetto heaven the same
    I have seen beyond yonder
    the splendour and wonders
    even seen stars shine behind the mountains
    maybe one day
    universal love will conquer the blemish within them
    kind of strange to imagine
    days with no nights
    roads with no signs
    a world with no sky
    A soldier born blind to their contradictions
    Dear Lord open up the gate
    we've got so much to gain
    in this world of strife and pain.

    An ode to all poets in destee....FIRE BURN!
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...............locust this was Great! This piece moved me...
    and I loved this verse:

    Oh lord why do teardrops drop
    like rainfall-drops
    whenever my pen stops?

    Keep the skill and the emotion flowin! Muchluv, Angelic
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was the exact part that got me.

    :jumping:Off the charts:jumping:
    I love everythign you write though.

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
  4. Khasm13

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    dude...
    you definately need to come around more
    ya skills are off da chain
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. Locust

    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall

    yo madd shout out and flavor to yall for supporting a WARrior, nuff respect to Khasm, Bluewater, Alizentang, R$ch and the rest of yall for ya inspirational pieces.
    Babylon BURN!
     
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