Black Poetry : The Aftermath of Prevention

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Soullyricist, Jul 7, 2003.

  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could tell you are explain to myself why my most inner gut is so hungry for a seed.
    Why when you release in me a wish for a fraction of a second tomorrow my world won’t be hungry any more.
    Never minding the soar parts of our love or even the act…it’s that for some reason I become famished dreaming of a planned aftermath I’m not ready for
    When you penetrate my core I’m so wrapped up in you, in love until I’m pinched at the possibility that expecting is simply not meant for me
    Could this be why my body is growling so hungrily?
    Could this be why I’m so desperately seeking what’s not for me
    What right now would be **** near a catastrophe because honestly I’m not prepared to be fed by the most high just yet
    I sit in the future I don’t know to be true and dwell on the possibility of there being no me and you
    Combination
    No tangible humanistic symbolization of our love
    What would be the aftermath if we loved so deeply without mans prevention of life, which I have chosen on my own to douse in my body for the past 5 years
    I wish I could realistically knock on our futures door
    Because I’m exhaustedly famished
    Dreaming of a planned aftermath I’m just not ready for



    © Tawanda Roberson
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soullyricist, this was superb...the fear that a love so strong would consume yet it is consuming without having yet materialized.

    famished for more scribes like this!
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep piece...i like it...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    took me in like a hoover ............love ya flow and how this
    was laid to canvas
    let ya ink continue
     
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