Black Poetry : The Affair

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The other woman
    Here I stand alone
    My man he left
    Went to his wife his home
    Alone I sleep while he sleeps with another
    Who am I
    Just the weekend lover
    Innocent enough it all began
    For I knew he was a married man
    Then as time passed I no longer cared
    I would have him
    If he dared
    It feels so great with his arms around me
    I just forget he has a family
    When we are together it feels so right
    I don't like to cuddle
    But I let his arms hold me tight
    The nights he manages to get away
    With me I know he will stay
    As I welcome this married man to my bed
    With no remorse for the wife he wed
    If she had made him feel like he was not alone
    Then she could keep him at home
    Emotions coming so fast
    With words I can not convey
    I want to be with him
    At the same time push him away
    I know with me he will never stay
    Falling to fast for a married man
    I need to let go while I still can
    He has His life
    His wife
    His home
    I know he'll never leave
    I am better off alone .......... :drink: :smokin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What I like most about this piece, other than how well written it is, is that it ends with the realization that to maintain any semblance of self, that this man should be left alone. Flow on poet.
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow the affair.....such real contemplations...as u went over thoughts trying to verify your actions. Nice drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so well felt and the depth of it was so real
    wow !!! :) poet express on ............enjoyed the flow
     
  5. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx ya'll i really enjoyed ur comments! I feel really special now :playball:
     
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