Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Ache

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's an ache
    It's a need
    It's that which
    makes hearts bleed
    with desire

    Sometimes the flame
    burns so intensely
    the want, ignites
    so immensely
    That the ache
    is beyond measure

    He gingerly lit
    the candle inside my heart
    so that I could feel the warmth
    exuded from the very start

    His light illuminated shadows
    so that I could see
    that becoming we
    wasn't beyond a possibility

    He walks across my mind
    each footprint leaving a glow
    so that I won't forget the journey
    that has brought us to know
    love...
    And so,
    as the longing builds
    and the strength of the quake
    of my heart beating, peaks
    I feels that ache.
    And the heat of it
    engulfs me...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully said as it engulf me this ache leaves a mark to prove it can be
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it can be, thank you brotha Rich for responding so.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    "The Ache" sometimes it aches so good.:)
    Lovely write


    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, sometimes it does. Thank you 4Everluv for responding so.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    wow

    very nice very nice

    mmmm

    you can feel this



    in your spirit


    of love

    the pure essence

    the respect

    and appreciation
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh so kind of you to say that you can feel all of that So'ja, thank you, very much appreciated.
     
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