Black Poetry : The 3rd Mecca

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  1. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The 3rd MÇcca
    See the world rotates around in a 360 degree and at some point in time
    Love and Life Diversified experiences has once given me the chance to feel and ride with
    My soul mÇcca
    Have you seen him?
    Cause he was like the 3rd MÇcca
    My soul MÇcca
    Can’t get him out of my system MÇcca
    His temple defines and refines my…
    His words demands attention
    And
    His presence was uplifting
    Thus
    His silence was noticed with the quickness
    But still…
    His was like the 3rd MÇcca
    Hmm
    The blak MÇcca
    And
    My soul MÇcca
    And
    The love MÇcca
    And
    The sweet MÇcca
    Cause
    Every noun, pronoun, verbs, adjectives demand concentration
    Rebuking any space or time for further interruptions
    Cause
    He was the blak MÇcca
    His aroma sublime in peace
    His stiffness dominated and anointed my blak opal
    Reassuring vital signs in my future dreams and seeds
    He was like the 3rd MÇcca
    My soul MÇcca
    His thoughts gave principality to my existence
    And
    Reconstructed my whole cellular architecture
    His love was like the 3rd MÇcca
    I’m facing east to salute and feel his presence while glaring at the west for reassurance
    I’m leaving north and south out of this cause
    His love spit verbs horizontally
    And flies like Sankofa bird
    His absence burns daily like an inferno
    Cause he was like the the 3rd Mecca
    I need him at the head of the table to bless this dinner for our future seeds
    So Ladies and Gentlemen
    Have you seen him?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'll keep an eye out and send a search party out
    i didn't see him .....nice flow poet!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dammmn Gooooooooooood!

    Nice flow,do the **** thang! This was on point and the rhythm was mesmerizing like a mantra! I loved it's whole vibe and flow!
    Great Job!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    I heard the words in ma head
    If no one else says it ,you heard it here,
    this was TIGHT!!!!
     
  5. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good looking out

    thanks for the luv. appreciate
     
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