Poetry Critiques : The 3rd Man

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Thanks for your input, I am honored to have had the pleasure of such company.
 

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man this was on point and real
this poem stands up and i wouldn't change a thing
 

1poetsought

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The 3rd Man
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No you didn't

Go out like that
Pluses to you poet

Educated

Mind intact

Long division

How we living

With you dissin'

All that's BLACK

Third planet from the sun

Third person African

Bread leavened

In season

Deceived

By your own attack ~

Darryl Abdu Omari
aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005

Know, you didn't ~ Thanks, everyone.

PEACE and BLESSINGS
 

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