Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Apr 9, 2001.
This is a hella tizite creation boyeeeee!!!!!
Mastery of vivid words and expressions!!!!
Feelin' it brotha!!!!
OOOH! YEAH!! I certainly enjoyed the vibe of your scribe...
REASON (wind beneath my poetic wings)...
we had the kind of nyght
where we didn't need candles
the lyght of love lit our path...
1+1=1... no need for math
simply stated you plus me-- became we
& the earth could have shattered...
it wouldn't have mattered as long as
you were lying there holding me...
our hearts beating in sync
You say we didn't make love...
& that on the contrary-- we made
Extra-Ordinary... i agree... 'cause
you see... any time You spend with me
is tremendously transcendent...
completely sublime... always easily
surpassing cloud 9
this seemingly suspended epiphany
is making it hard for me to speak
yet i must convey... in some way how
this Paradyse Found has affected my life
& how You are the wonderful Reason why
the Sun Shynes so bryght...
even on the darkest of nyghts
hey you!! i couldn't resist!! you are so
beautiful & wonderful & magnificent... all
of dat! thank you for keeping your promise...
see why you're my constant!!?? i loves ya flow!!
o my God.....
it most definatly is love!
tyte as hell hunnie!!
*losing myself in the maze in my mind*
~soaking in it~
Thank you all!!!
Yall dont know how grateful I am to have yall poetic greats checkin fa me... thanks for da love!
Reason, baby boy!
you want me to ask you to marry me again? hit my email up...holla!!!!!
Reason wow! u r so ummmmm!
i love how u flowed this at her
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