Quiet Poetry Lounge : The 25th Hour (Inspired by GA_Sunshyne's Paradise Found)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Apr 9, 2001.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fella!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is a hella tizite creation boyeeeee!!!!!

    Mastery of vivid words and expressions!!!!

    Feelin' it brotha!!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  3. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOH! YEAH!! I certainly enjoyed the vibe of your scribe...
    right cheah!
    Jyntl
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REASON (wind beneath my poetic wings)...

    we had the kind of nyght
    where we didn't need candles
    the lyght of love lit our path...
    1+1=1... no need for math
    simply stated you plus me-- became we
    & the earth could have shattered...
    it wouldn't have mattered as long as
    you were lying there holding me...
    our hearts beating in sync

    You say we didn't make love...
    & that on the contrary-- we made
    Extra-Ordinary... i agree... 'cause
    you see... any time You spend with me
    is tremendously transcendent...
    completely sublime... always easily
    surpassing cloud 9

    this seemingly suspended epiphany
    is making it hard for me to speak
    yet i must convey... in some way how
    this Paradyse Found has affected my life
    & how You are the wonderful Reason why
    the Sun Shynes so bryght...
    even on the darkest of nyghts

    hey you!! i couldn't resist!! you are so
    beautiful & wonderful & magnificent... all
    of dat! thank you for keeping your promise...
    see why you're my constant!!?? i loves ya flow!!

    LuvU4Life
    ...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    o my God.....

    it most definatly is love!


    tyte as hell hunnie!!


    *losing myself in the maze in my mind*
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah

    Divine!

    ~soaking in it~

    A
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all!!!

    Yall dont know how grateful I am to have yall poetic greats checkin fa me... thanks for da love!

    Reas
     
  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason, baby boy!

    you want me to ask you to marry me again? hit my email up...holla!!!!!
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely

    Delicious
     
  10. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason wow! u r so ummmmm!
    i love how u flowed this at her
     
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