Black Poetry : THE 23RD HOUR

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  1. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    As my body slides into the sea of foam
    I succumb to the calm of motionlessness
    My senses are charmed by the still
    of this hydrogenoxygen mix

    Letting go of intellect
    I give myself permission
    to enjoy the thought of you

    It is impossible to measure
    the pleasure enveloping
    encompassing dissecting
    and nourishing me in this
    the 23rd hour

    In this state of mind of mine
    I am wholly vulnerable
    to the memory you deposited
    throughout my entire being
    ensuring I find serenity
    in my dreams
    tonight
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GO ON REST SLEEP AND DREAMETH OF YA LOVE
    FORTH U R A DREAMER.....OF GREATNESS
     
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    love this ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FINALLY YOU HAVE GRACED MY PRESENCE!!
    This is BOMB...

    You know I love this right? But....you knew that....

    8th!!
     
  5. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU FOR THE WELCOME DESTEE
    IT'S FEELIN' LIKE HOME UP IN HERE
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok miss.... what's up?

    8th!
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the 23rd hour of happiness
    consumed by the metaphysical
    is what i see in you, captured
    by the unending embrace of love...

    welcome to the room once again and i must truly say this piece is exquisite....keep us intrigued through your eyes
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Makes me want to drift off to the land of dreams....This is tight!!!!!!!
     
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