Black Poetry : The 1 that got away!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Sep 29, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im no poet
    I only hope to amuse
    I want to get you to think
    About what you choose
    About who you love
    But dont love them too much
    They might not love you
    Dont use that as a crutch
    Im a personal being
    Of personal words
    Though some that I say
    They might be absurd
    But Ive seen It happen
    Ive seen it play out
    You dont understand
    So you cry and you shout
    And you write about feelings
    Like nobody else feels the same
    Well, some do for small parts
    And I got some small fame.
    But I struggle inside
    And I cannot stop what I say
    The one I used to love
    The one that got away. :hi: :angel1:



    :dj: :angel1: *~Be careful wut u choose to do in lyfe becuz sum1 maybe followin ur footsteps~* :band: :chef:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice release enjoyed this scribe...flow on
     
  3. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we are only flesh and blood, so we have emotions. all though the one that got away usally isnt the right one. we are human so we feel. some of us choose to share are feelings with the a pen. its just important to share your emotions in one form or another. enjoyed your flow
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Express yourself, express yourself...

    Loved it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya deep expression as u open up here
    this was very nicely done
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can never completely forget a past love, no matter how hard ya try. Flow on, I hear you.
     
  7. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx 4 the love ya'll im feelin it!!! :geek:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa! This is deep. And freakin fresh. Give us some mo!
     
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