Black Poetry : That's the Way Love Goes!!!

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So he hurt your feelings deeply
    He made you cry all day
    He loved you, then broke your heart
    And your life is over, you say.

    Night time roles around
    And it's hard for you to sleep
    You close your eyes and hear Mama's words
    Be careful of the company you keep.

    Some are saying be strong
    Others are saying it's okay
    Your bestfriend gives you a hug
    And says, "he was no good for you anyway".

    You hear the words they are speaking
    And you believe them to be true
    But you put years in that relationship
    This guy became apart of you.

    You know you have to get out
    And find somebody new
    But for now you want to lay in bed
    Feeling Down and Blue.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so true so true,but ,


    THATS THE WAY LOVE GOES!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, that is the way it goes sometimes. When someone becomes a part of you, you have to give yourself time to heal from it all, before moving on to someone new. Many can relate to your words, which rang so true.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true indeed that's how it flowz , with love we never knowz
    tyte drop
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight flow!!!!
     
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    love is truly a gamble
    this was well written
    and had great visuals
    it's funny how people
    can try to comfort you
    but sometimes the pain
    of a lost love can only
    by soothed by time
    and time doesn't come
    fast enough when you
    need it to...

    heartfelt scribe...
    Sage
     
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