Black Poetry : That's How She Took My Soul

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  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's how she took my soul
    I hold on and think back
    reanact the perfect feel the perfect touch
    the perfect vision of love
    to bring about a division of this
    would simply crucify the very being of each kiss
    that brought my world to her knees
    had me screaming please
    as our hearts raced at a pace
    unforgiving
    had my head spining and i began
    to embellish in who
    indulge and bask in all of you
    relate, release, and unmask just who
    I really am
    That;s how she took my soul
    I cried tears when God broke mold
    and formed truth
    blessed my so profusely
    I broke down and felt loose
    then you cam and framed
    me to mere perfection
    gave new direction and rewrote our vivid history
    Metaphorically speaking
    my eyes were seeking in a dark place
    for a familiar face
    or a comforting space in existence
    Just like stars complete the moon
    you complete this void and we can
    still resume to gaze like stars
    surrounded by the midnights sky
    when I felt you my ora rewinded
    just 2 tracks played my part
    and the jam reminded
    me of how the words created rhythm
    and the rhythm gave beat
    soon i felt movement and you were
    a part of me
    That's how you took my soul.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release soulfully love this drop
    let da ink continue to run very nice.
     
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    very nice scribing
    loved it!!!!
     
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    One word!!!!! BREATHTAKING!!!!!
     
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    Beautiful word play in this, makes you just want to sigh. Wonderful.
     
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