Black Poetry : **** that woo-thang!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShadeeLadee, Aug 1, 2002.

  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thinking about who wooed who
    why you think you love me
    why I thought I loved you
    thinking why I ever thought
    I'd need a new boo
    baby, what the hell is this?
    & what we gone do?

    thinking about babies
    yours and mine, and
    the other "minor" details
    and who gone define
    the boundaries &
    the visitations
    the ***'d up madness
    of our situations

    thinking about the bedroom
    and that woo-woo touch
    wish I didn't like to do it
    so **** much

    and the babies cry
    and the bills pile high
    and the more you try
    the more I sigh
    wonderin why
    I ain't said "bye bye"

    cuz I'm thinking this time
    I done played myself
    shoulda kept my woo-thang
    on the muthafuk'n shelf


    Shade
     
  2. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm in the valley of decision...

    thanks for feelin it.

    Shade
     
  3. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I heard every word. :heart:

    Shade
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shade.


    i am lovin' the flow. (as usual)

    ...& respectin' the message.

    when i find myself in the "valley of decision"
    i try to remember that valleys ain't all bad...
    they are just low enough to offer us a clear
    view of everything that's goin' on around
    us ...& this allows us to make sound&definite
    choices. you feelin' me?
    (well... that's just my 5 cents! :lol: )

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  5. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling you strong my sista. Hold on.

    Bert
     
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    nice flow

    keep on keeping on cause your blessing is waiting for you on the other side of through ! ;)
     
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    what my peeps said
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed this piece!!!! I'll be checkin for you ma...

    Reas
     
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