Black Poetry : That That Is (on creation and evolution)

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  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Creator spoke the word
    BE!
    and it
    IS!
    As far as eyes and minds can see
    And beyond

    They too came into being
    Caused also by the Creator's word
    And even their very seeing
    And all the sights
    And all now and yet to emerge
    Evolving over six initial periods
    Called days
    All from that cause and the ways
    Placed in motion by the One

    Now with audacity they pause
    To dare doubt
    And hypothesize
    Using words from the original

    BE!

    Thinking themselves overly wise
    Even denying

    the BE!

    that IS!

    That IS! them

    That IS! this and all they see, and beyond

    THAT IS!
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOOOOOOW :deal: :deal: :deal: THIS WAS TTTYTE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    100% super awesome poet
    u really out did ya self on dis one
    lovin it to the fullest
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i so enjoy reading you
    i love this wow
    tight
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well there's no sense in trying to recreate the creation, it just is. So concisely put.
     
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    It sure got my attention...BE...and it shall be. much respect to you, I was really feeling this, ...thanks
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THEONE,
    Thanks, Poet.....

    RICH, Appreciate the great comment....

    mzblkangel
    Hey, thanks much....... :blush: i don't spose ta be doin that...but it's hard to keep a straight face....

    watzinaname, well it seems it would be evident.....but some fools don't git it...

    queentswana, thank ya and do BE!
     
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    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful
    Rasheed :spinstar:
     
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