Black Poetry : That sumpthin...sumpthin

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t you tease me
    Please…my love have taken over
    No longer in control
    As my emotions run
    Filled with the vision of
    You and I
    The sweet taste that floods my heart
    And flows in my veins
    Have my soul dancin
    And my spirit prancin
    You give me something
    That
    sumpthin
    sumpthin
    That gives me chills
    Within thrills
    As we climb the hills of love
    Making me feel good inside
    Goose bumps when you are near
    Cold showers when we hang up
    The phone….warm dreams
    As I sleep….
    Makes me see the stars in da sun
    The shine in da moon
    When my eyes are closed
    As the orbs take on a new look
    I call your name
    You give me something
    That
    sumpthin
    sumpthin
    When you talk about the house
    You and I
    And kids
    Good times and sad
    Saying we gone make it
    Tell me now…. are you for real
    See I can groove you
    As you move me
    Don’t tease me now
    My love is real
    And baby it’s strong
    Ready for the long haul
    Are you…..
    See baby don’t tease me now
    Talking about you aim to please
    And deliver my pleasure
    With every deep measure
    You give me something
    That
    sumpthin
    sumpthin
    Moves me in a groove
    That has me in rapture
    Before I been captured
    Come on now….
    Don’t you be teasing me
    Doing that talk
    Making a house into a home
    And fix dinner
    Wake up in your arms
    Rock and roll
    Fold and mold
    All through the years
    Hold and love
    Not just one night
    Calling me your baby
    And pumpkin pie
    Don’t tease me now
    You give me something
    That
    sumpthin
    sumpthin
    That I been needing and missing for years

    (c) 2004
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  2. Leaky103

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    reincarnated

    Girl, you got Maxwell's lyrics reincarnated. I like this and I hope you get the sumpthin, sumpthin
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Angel....

    I love this piece. :D :D :D :D :D :D

    This is a wonderful piece...speak, Sista...speak. :wink:

    :thanks: for sharing your excitement, your joy about that sumpthin sumpthin. :wink:

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow this was awesome i love how u presented it ....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love on dis happy you all enjoyed
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Wanting more than just a taste, desiring a love of a lifetime. Sumpthin we all can relate to. I liked the way you conveyed this into words.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: watz fo da love on this...Angel