Black Poetry : That Star...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That star...
    Seems so attainable
    yet so far.
    You stand out as
    the brightest,
    yet I can't really
    understand the slightest
    about your aura.
    It's beyond me,
    it's a mystery
    tis supposed to be
    I guess. Yet I still
    keep trying to reach
    out and touch this dream
    that's only meant to teach.
    Maybe it's best that I
    simply learn from the glow,
    for it is, after all
    a star, you know.
    Shining brightly
    touching the very heart
    of all flightless matter
    and igniting it to start
    soaring...
    That star....
     
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    nice flow
    feel ya vibe on dis
    flow on
    Peace Angel
     
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    Mzblkangel, glad you're feeling this flow and liking the vibe...thankyou.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome sis....
    nice drop
    Peace
     
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    star bright of da night holding a mystery
    very nicely done i like dis here flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice to know you're enjoying the brightness and the mystery of it all...thankyou Rich
     
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    indeed it was a delightful scribe
    keep flowin
     
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    I enjoy your responses Cindy...Who it is...not just one person, more like a mixture...Thank you....
     
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    this reminds me of a time...many years ago in my youth
    I was standing at a bus stop and a man who appeared to be
    destitute walked up to me and began to talk about stars...
    and then he looked at me as if he'd had a revelation and
    said...but then there is that one...that shines so brightly
    and you can't help but take notice...and then he went
    on his way...I suppose he had just had the experience
    you speak of in your piece

    there are people who enter your life like this...
    having always had a passion for astrology...
    and the inner beauty of people...
    I sooooooo enjoyed this piece
    Excellent read sister!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angelicsage, you know I always like hearing from ya. Guess it could be seen as a revelation of sorts...Thankyou much.
     
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