Black Poetry : That Song

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by monad.poetress, Aug 5, 2004.

  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tonight I need to hear that song​
    where the saxaphone plays​
    and the old guy says​
    Love's just to hard to hold on to​

    Sometimes I wish we never met​
    Maybe my pillow wouldn't be so wet​
    Maybe my eyes wouldn't be so red​
    I listen to Otis sing and I too feel dead​

    Tonight his words cascade through my soul​
    He describes my life and how love unfolds​

    I need to hear that song where Patti says someone loves me​
    Whoa Whoa Whoa​
    Even though my heart sings No No No​

    I need to hear that song where Aretha tells him to call me​
    the moment, the second he gets there​
    But in my heart I know when he gets there he still won't care​

    I need to be carressed by those songs​
    I need to feel there touch​
    Even though he hates me and I love him very much​

    So play me that song where love one day returns​
    Where theres a ribbon in the sky​
    For our love will never die​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth flowing love da vibe here

    keep in mind to get ya membership and enjoy
    features as a premium member ....keep flowing !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was some tight flow...
    i tellya i understand what ya mean...
    flow it...release it
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I can feel this, when just words won't do, and you're just aching to hear just the right song to suit your mood. This scribe is on the money poet.
     
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    Envy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this...

    Envy :spinstar:
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...this was heartwrenching
    but so beautiful, all together
    Music has that affect...
    that soothing affect that
    can take you away from the
    pain, if only for a moment...

    Love this flow!
     
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